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Here's a tanka I wrote belonging to the same tradition:

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Raised floors hide the chaos.

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A good designer enables upgrades.

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A good designer enables upgrades.@]

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Newbies always ask:

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Here's a tanka I wrote belonging to the same tradition:

Newbies always ask:

  "Elements or attributes?

"Which will serve me best?"

  Those who know roar like lions;
  Wise hackers smile like tigers.

-- John Cowan

Raised floors hide the chaos. Facades hide the boilerplate. A good designer enables upgrades.

-- Len Bullard

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